a closed but not locked door
and you go careening down the hallway
bitching at walls and skidding around corners
falling down the stairs
mucking in the mud down there
wrecking the time as much as you can to feed the day its duerevolt, revolt
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I like this a lot! There are so many ways to read it.
It is really great. I agree completely. I can feel the phrases but have no idea what’s happening or why.